This is very badly written and I think the author might benefit from rewriting this.
Start with a description of the solution. If you can't cover it in 1-2 paragraphs at the beginning, you are in trouble. Don't focus so much on what everyone else is doing wrong - focus on what you are doing and let others be the judge of whether this is better.
Start with a description of the solution. If you can't cover it in 1-2 paragraphs at the beginning, you are in trouble. Don't focus so much on what everyone else is doing wrong - focus on what you are doing and let others be the judge of whether this is better.